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muby
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Help Needed
« Thread Started on Nov 1, 2008, 12:22am »

Hi Guys,

I need help in writing a script and the camera angles etc. Anybody who has experience or is willing to help, please mail me at mubariz@cmu.edu

Thanks

PS: Great work Freeson

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Re: Help Needed
« Reply #1 on Nov 7, 2008, 6:17pm »

why don't you post what you had so far.

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Script So Far
« Reply #2 on Nov 11, 2008, 2:07am »

CLASH (Just gave some random title name…)
Movie starts with a split screen
Its day break on both parts of the screen.
on the left hand side we see one guy in a plush bed, waking up to the sound of his alarm clock.The sun is shining through the window and he seems a little pissed getting up. (GUY A)
On the right hand side, we see a guy sleeping somewhere on the streets of a war torn city. He's shivering as he wakes up with a smile on his face. He has scars on his lips and a worn out face. Looks weak and tired. (GUY B)
Left side of the screen slides out as the GUY B is seen looking around for something. He finds a tap and sees that water is trickling down the tap. He rushes to the tap and starts slurping down the little water trickling down the tap.
The screen slowly slides to the right and on the left side we see the GUY A in his bathroom...he opens the tap in his sink to full force and on the right we see the tap in the war torn country running out of water and GUY B seems frustrated because of it. The right screen slides out completely, leaving us with GUY A brushing his teeth.
He freshens up and grabs a sub from the refrigerator and is seen reading the newspaper about the war in some city while eating it. He doesn't like what he's eating and throws it to a bin at his right. Simultaneously the right screen slides in and the sub is seen falling onto the right screen. The left screen slides out.
We see GUY B shooing away street dogs that are fighting for the bread. He scares the dog away and is seen enjoying his meal. The left screen slides back in and we see GUY A, settling down on his couch in front of his television. The right screen slides out. GUY A puts in a war game cd into his XBOX and starts playing the game which shows a group of soldiers in a war torn country, running up a street. The right screen slides back in (showing GUY B still enjoying his meal) when the GUY A starts shooting and blowing up things on his screen. GUY B gets startled at the sudden outbreak of gunfire and bombs and is seen running for his life. The left screen slides out as we see GUY B running for cover through battered streets, trying to find a place to hide.
Left screen slides back in and we see, GUY A, abandoning his joystick. He gets up, puts on his jogging gear and leaves his house and is seen jogging on the streets. A bunch of kids are jogging ahead of him and he can't go through them because of a fat kid covering his path. He bumps into the fat kid and as the kid is falling to his right the right screen in sliding back in with GUY B still running. GUY A looks back at the kid and smiles. The fat kids falls from the left screen onto the right as a thin kid in bare minimal clothes and bleeding from his legs. Left screen slides out.
GUY B picks up the injured kid and is seen running with him to find a place to hide.
Left screen slides back in and we see both the guys, one jogging through a street and the other running with the injured kid. GUY B finds a place big enough for the kid to hide, so he leaves the kid in the safe place and turns away to find a place for himself. GUY A turns around a corner.
GUY A collides with a bicycle coming from the other side and is seen crashing onto the road while there is a bomb explosion on the right side and GUY B is seen falling onto the street as well.
As both the GUYS are lying down, we see two guys helping GUY A up while GUY B turns around while on his back trying to see if the kid is safe.
On the left screen we see the fat kid arrive at the scene where the GUY A has fallen, he looks at the GUY A and smiles as he's happy to see him fallen on the street bleeding from his leg. Simultaneously, we see the GUY B smiling to find the kid safe and is seen breathing his last with a smile on his face.

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